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    And I Thought All I Lacked Was a Beret…


    2010 - 03.24

    Like many daydreaming youths, I once pictured the life of a writer as a dance between cool genius and raving eccentricity.  Writers spent their time in the hippest (defined as such by their lack of appeal to the general public) cafes, smoking fags and savoring espresso.  Discerning eyes would people-watch from the narrow shadow of a beret, “knowing” a passerby with breath-catching intimacy in the span of two blinks.

    A year ago, I decided to be a Writer.

    • I can’t bring myself to smoke.  Tried it once in high school, desperately fought to not puke afterwards.
    • Sipping espresso: Check.  In fact, I drink twice as much as I imagined Writers should — you know, to make up for the whole not smoking thing.
    • People-watching is natural, as I am naturally nosey.  Breath-catching intimacy?  Maybe not, but I adeptly read most body language, and I’m quite good at imagining stories for strangers.
    • I never could bring myself to buy a beret.  I just don’t have the bone structure for it.  (And they leave those forehead lines — girls know what I mean).

    Imagine my surprise when, just last evening, I found myself diagraming speech patterns for my characters.  ”Oh dear,” I said to Bandit, “I’ve crossed over into eccentricity.”  My cat blinked casually; she rarely responds once she’s weaseled dinner from me.

    I wiped dust from my copy of “Martha and Bob,” adding it to the nightstand book pile (if that thing ever falls, I’m sure to lose an eye).  It’s been too long; I need to brush up on my grammar (I’m sure I could give an editor fits with my reckless use of punctuation and clauses!) and there’s no point putting it off when I can layer it in *somewhere.*

    Thus far, I dare say that diagramming speech patterns is the most unexpected thing I’ve done while writing/revising my novel.

    What’s the oddest or least expected thing you’ve done when writing?

    Paging Dr. Morris, Please. I Have a Grammar Question!


    2010 - 03.20

    As part of attending a local writing workshop, I’m expected to share two examples of my work.  At first, I blithely determined I would take in a few random pages for feedback.  Yet the night before my turn to share, it dawned on me: most of the other workshop attendees are poets.  Not only are they poets accustomed to a type of writing, they’ve never even *read* fantasy.  Their genre deals in stanzas.  Mine deals in trilogies.  Aaaaaaaaand you see why I suddenly freak out when tasked with finding a 500 word or less sample of my writing (attempts at math tell me this is roughly 0.0036% of my first draft) that will make “sense” to this particular audience (several of whom, quite innocently, asked if I had properly explained to my audience why a Faie’s body would be stronger than a human’s.  Well, yes, actually — I do explain that eventually, but it’s one of those things that fantasy readers just *accept* until the author sees fit to extrapolate; it’s a convention of the genre that I take for granted, but which concerned this particular audience).

    So the night before our meeting, I settled on a few text fragments that I’m *considering* using at the beginning of chapters, since they are supposed to be somewhat ambiguous and, if nothing else, I can get a gauge for what type of questions or emotions they stir in a reader.

    Despite my anxiety, I received some helpful insight/feedback, but there was ONE grammar criticism that I just couldn’t agree with, even though several of the other writers emphatically supported the correction.  I humbly ask that, if it does need correcting, SOMEone explain more thoroughly, in grammar-ese, please!

    Should it be:

    “Our worlds in balance is now but a dream, for we have thrust together two distinct Creations…”

    or:

    “Our worlds in balance are now but a dream, for we have thrust together two distinct Creations…”

    ?

    The critic’s justification was that “worlds” is my subject (plural), thus my “be” verb should be plural (“are”).  I completely understand why he would make this argument, but I don’t consider “worlds” to be my subject, I think “balance” is.  In my head, when I diagram this out, there’s an elliptical article (“a balance”); if I untangled the sentence, a more traditional way of writing it would be “A balance in our worlds is now but a dream,” but that’s not how the speaker of this passage would say such things.

    The subject/verb is critical here because it drastically affects the meaning of my sentence.  If “worlds” WERE my subject, then the sentence would convey that the worlds are now a dream, or essentially non-existent, which implies the story takes place outside the realm of space/time.  If “balance” is my subject, I imply that balance is no longer attainable, but the worlds still exist.  Two very different beginnings, indeed!

    So help me out here — if you were reading this sentence, would the verb “is” drive you nuts?

    Remember When…?


    2010 - 02.26

    Remember back in November, when I decided to do NaNoWriMo, and we agreed that it was ambitious, considering I was already working on my baby and a new project would just distract me?

    And remember when, after finishing/”winning” NaNo, I was all proud, but felt a lacking of sorts?

    Remember when, just recently, I finished (*cue tooting of horn*  Toot, toot!  Too-oot-toot-toot! Kk, enough tooting—we don’t wanna be annoying) my first draft?  137k words?  Anyone?

    I’ve been staring at the wall (because the paint scheme of my living room holds all life’s answers, of course) and trying to think of what else “needs be doing,” as Mevy would say (see, even when I’m trying to NOT work on my novel, the darned kids try to possess my thoughts — can Mommy have just a week of peace, please?!), before I begin the dreaded revision process.  Then, like a stroke of genius, an off-handed remark from a fellow in the Nashville Writers critique group offered a glorious solution:

    Revise because peer pressure demands you must, else you look like a flaky good-for-naught (read: go participate in NaNoEdMo).

    I encourage all aspiring writers to come join me — I hear Misery made some tasty scones to share.

    Satisfied with the quick post, and in a bit of a rush to meet Jessica for their Zumba date, Dawn opens a new browser window to tap out her last note of the day:

    Dear Sanity,

    Remember when. . .?”

    Hear Me Roar


    2010 - 01.19

    I made my list of New Year’s goals, wrote them in a pretty blue notebook, and reassured myself that these  would be attainable.  ”Heck,” I thought, “I’m being a bit modest–I could add several more. . .” but I decided against that,  reasoning that my “resolutions” could be reevaluated and revamped at a later time.

    Then Hubby got sick.  Always committed to going full-throttle, he got really sick.  Epic sick.  In my attempts to babysit him after the thermometer incident, I stayed up until 4 AM, slept (fitfully) until 9:30 AM, then begged our babies (1 dog, 1 cat) to not be overly angry about their late breakfast/walk.  Amidst the fog of sleep deprivation, the whole hooping a half marathon seemed. . . less rational than I’d first thought.  And what about finishing my draft?  In December, heading into the hectic holiday season, I’d promised myself two weeks alone to finish the draft, come hell or high-water, but I could never have anticipated the Epic strep/infection/flu.

    Then I remembered, “Oh yea, I’m a woman. . .”

    I nursed Hubby, through coughing fits and high fevers, I nursed him, and in those witching hours of the night I read as many horribly boring history books as possible.  Why?  To reinforce that I am stubborn disciplined enough to accomplish anything.  I juggled the dog and the cat (not literally, of course–the dog would probably cooperate, but the cat would have none of that), modeling my wardrobe after that of the Michelin Man as I braved freezing temperatures to run laps around the yard with Savvy, and choking down (horrible) herbal teas that would prevent me from catching cold as I snuggled with Bandit.  I attended 3 Zumba classes in 3 days and, trust me, if you’d met Kyya–one of our awesome Zumba instructors–you’d know why that alone deserves a medal.

    And just yesterday I attended my first Hooping-the-Half official Hoop Walk (and after, I forced my reluctant muscles through a Zumba class.  Masochist–who, me?).  I am woman. . .

    . . . and the first draft of my novel is finished.

    Did I Mention. . .?


    2009 - 12.17

    . . .That I officially “won” NaNo?  Cuz I did.  Oh, the piece I wrote is a horrid thing, taking graphically violent twists here and there (which I’m still blaming on my lack of sleep and general frustration with being “rushed,” though those are probably some of the strongest passages in the “book”) and often dragging through tedious, meaningless dialogue, but I met my goal of 50k words in one month.

    Oddly enough, my life felt somehow emptier after NaNo.  Hubby suggested that this was because I am a restless person.  Normally, I would contest this as a dirty lie, because I’m quite fond of believing I’m a laid-back gal, but, alas, he was accurate (at least on this count!  I still maintain that I do NOT sound like Cher when I sing!)

    So I devised a plan.  If I could write 50k of crap, could I not, perhaps, write 20k of workable material?  1k a day, that’s my motto, 1k per workday.  In theory, it means my novel draft will be finished by January.

    Hubby also spilled the beans (Oh!  It’s a punny, but you can’t understand it yet–) that he’s getting me an espresso maker for Christmas (Get it?  Beans?  Espresso beans?  So punny!).  Just in time for the New Year–and my novel revisions!  *fingers crossed*